glacian: by ponponpon (❄Some say the world--)
gєитιαиα ([personal profile] glacian) wrote in [community profile] retrospec2017-04-10 12:20 am

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Gentiana Illyria shared a photo.
4/10 near Expressive, Tisse

Replacing earmuffs
Harmony between both ears
Success through brute force
#haiku #poetry
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[personal profile] complementing 2017-04-10 08:13 am (UTC)(link)
Minako Arisato Reading Retrospec
Minako Arisato Haikus are so nostalgic!
Minako Arisato Wait. Use of brute force?
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[personal profile] complementing 2017-04-10 01:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Minako Arisato Oh! Haha I see!
Minako Arisato Packaging is troublesome
Minako Arisato You write haikus well!
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[personal profile] complementing 2017-04-11 01:42 am (UTC)(link)
Minako Arisato do you mean like this:
Minako Arisato as they are, poems are music
Minako Arisato each syllable, sound?

Minako Arisato that one took ten minutes to feel right ahaha
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[personal profile] complementing 2017-04-11 02:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Minako Arisato ehehehe I dunno I don't think I'd be very good at creative writing...
Minako Arisato I'm only good at haikus since I had to write them all the time during elementary school
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[personal profile] voidedmemory 2017-04-10 12:53 pm (UTC)(link)
It is a very solid haiku. Your simplicity is definitely keeping to the spirit of the art form!

But what do your earmuffs or this picture have to do with brute force, if you do not mind me asking.
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[personal profile] accordance 2017-04-10 03:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Where did you take this picture, if I may ask?
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[personal profile] accordance 2017-04-10 04:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Perhaps I will then, with your recommendation.

I find the woods very calming for the soul.
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[personal profile] accordance 2017-04-10 04:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Nature is easily forgotten by those who find the virtual more interesting company. But such is the touch of youth.

I hail from the countryside of fair England, so the green have never been far from my heart. What of you?
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[personal profile] accordance 2017-04-10 05:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I sought a peaceful place, a new experience.

Might you be into books as well?
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[personal profile] accordance 2017-04-10 05:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Only moderately so, I am afraid my days of gallivanting are already over.

What would you recommend?
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[personal profile] accordance 2017-04-11 03:31 pm (UTC)(link)
It does sound quite interesting.

In what way would you draw parallels between it and the recent events?
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[personal profile] okitactless 2017-04-11 03:13 am (UTC)(link)
that last line makes it sound like you changed the seasons through brute force (笑)