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chiyo sakura 🌸 ([personal profile] admiringly) wrote in [community profile] retrospec2017-07-23 07:57 pm

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hi! i hope everyone is having a great day so far! and if not i hope it gets better!
i have a couple questions or something to advertise i guess?
um!!

one is does anyone have any (hallucino)memories of androids or being an android or a cyborg or something like that? or could someone tell me the difference between the two because i'm not sure i know... (i'm sorry!)

two is what's your favorite flower? now that we have some blue and green back it's not as depressing to work at a flower shop!

and if anyone wants a flower crown, please come to Enchanted Blossoms! i'll make one personally for you at a discounted price! ❀ it can be one that'll make me or others think of you or one to your exact specifications!

oh here's an example of one i've made recently!



please come by anytime this week! i should be working everyday!


[ ooc: Please feel free to go to action if your character would stop by the flower shop! ]
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[personal profile] thesettingsun 2017-08-01 03:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Not at all! You should be proud of your improvement. Nobody knows how much better you've gotten as well as you do!
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[personal profile] thesettingsun 2017-08-05 12:58 pm (UTC)(link)
If you say your mistakes immediately, you'd fix all of them, or at least that's how it is with my writing.
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[personal profile] thesettingsun 2017-08-07 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
I don't usually, editing as you go is a good way to not get anything finished. But I definitely edit before anything I write sees the light of day.

What I'm saying is, if you knew they were mistakes right away, you'd fix them before finishing the piece. Getting better is as much about learning how not to do things that make your picture/story worse as it is about how to do things that make it better. If that makes any sense.
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[personal profile] thesettingsun 2017-08-07 01:16 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't have a dedicated editor, but I get somebody to proofread my stuff before I send it in anywhere. There's nothing like a second pair of eyes looking at your work. When you've written a passage you know what you meant to put in there, and so if you left out a word your brain will fill it in for you.
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[personal profile] thesettingsun 2017-08-07 10:20 pm (UTC)(link)
It's definitely the worst. But it's way easier to go back and change a passage when you've finished the whole story than it is to fix lines when you've already done your coloring and shading, so I don't envy you either.