[text] i could say i'm sorry but i'm not (except i am. i really, really am.)

[frostythehitman]

I've finally got this song together, but I'm still stumped on the title. I'm putting the lyrics in here for anyone who's got any ideas. Consider this an open call for song title suggestions.


Lyrics:
You punched a hole in my heart, and now
I'm an empty vessel, waiting for the music to fill the blank spaces.
What am I supposed to do now?
Nothing left but to forget all the sneering faces

I feel like a forgotten bag of chips abandoned on the streets, my soul shattered and scattering to the winds like potato leaves.
I’d break the whole world if I could
Just to make sure no one ever has to grieves
Again, and I'd break the whole world but I don't think that I should

The emptiness inside of me is hardening like cement
And now there's nothing that can fit through the cracks and spaces
Nothing left but to watch the spiraling descent
Nothing left but to remember all the sneering faces

I feel like a forgotten bag of chips abandoned on the streets, my soul shattered and scattering to the winds like potato leaves.
I’d break the whole world if I could
Just to make sure no one ever has to grieves
Again, and I'd break the whole world but I don't think that I should

[fade out]

Comments

[meshiakh]

Oh, you wanted something less obvious?

How about "Abandoned Carbohydrates"? I think it sounds kind of cool!

[frostythehitman]

[ Oh my god. ]

Oh my god.

That could be the subtitle for it or something though. People are gonna look at it and go, "what does the Abandoned Carbohydrates part mean? It's so deep."

[meshiakh]

I'm glad you like it! I'm definitely rooting for you!!
Do you have your music available for sampling anywhere, though? I'd love to hear!
Otherwise, do you do lives?

[frostythehitman]

Sure, I've got one song up right now.

[ Here he links to his soundcloud, with one song titled "...And Nobody Understands", which sounds a lot like an alternate universe version of this song, but much less polished. ]

I haven't done any live shows yet but I'm looking to book some soon once I get the rest of the songs on this album done.

i'm dead

[meshiakh]

So cool!! I listened to it and that's really cool!
I love the arrangement! [ Joshua you sure you know anything about music... ]
If you do, please announce it, I'll be sure to come!

Sorry for asking this but do you happen to have some hardships?
I totally understand the feeling of not being understood by others. [ What a sentence. ]
They think putting mayonnaise on egg is weird, but this is my preference!

[frostythehitman]

Hardships? Sure. It's hard to keep myself out of trouble all the time. It's like walking on eggshells.

[ Ooh, hang on, that's a good one. James takes a break from writing the reply to scribble that eggshell line down in his little lyrical notebook. ]

But I'm not gonna lie man. Mayonnaise on egg? That is pretty weird. Unless it's like part of an egg salad.

BUCKY IS INTERNATIONAL TREASURE i will not stop saying this

[meshiakh]

Deep! That is so deep!!! (*ﾟ▽ﾟﾉﾉﾞ☆
You will become a very popular artist one day, I'm sure of it!

Well, it's especially good on salad!
But you know, sometimes you just want people to understand your differences!
Like wearing different socks on different feet!

[frostythehitman]

[ He finds the overwhelmingly positive support strange, but also...welcome? It's a very strange feeling for sure. ]

Wait. Do you actually do that? Wear different socks on your feet, I mean.

[meshiakh]

Yeah! Let me show you one of my favourites!



Here!

[frostythehitman]

Wow. Seriously?

I think my sister had those socks. When she was eight.

[meshiakh]

Oh, did she lose it?
I have extra pairs I can share with her!!
I haven't used them yet!

[frostythehitman]

Dude she's like 13 now, she's completely outgrown them.

[meshiakh]

There are no worries! They can stretch!
My feet are pretty big, but the fit is good (*｀◇´*)/
They are warm, too!

[frostythehitman]

No man, I mean she's too mature to wear socks like that now.

[meshiakh]

Eeh, what are you saying?
You can never be too mature for these socks!
Fashion knows no age!

[ Says who... ]

[frostythehitman]

For you, maybe, but my sister's got a reputation to uphold. And that reputation doesn't include cartoon socks.

[meshiakh]

Ah, does your sister do music too?
I guess these kind of style doesn't work well with certain genres, huh...

[frostythehitman]

No man, I just said she's 13. Music or not, 13 year old girls care about their image too much to wear cartoon socks.

[meshiakh]

It's never too young to start!
But you're right, I guess they are very mindful...

By the way, what's your name?

[frostythehitman]

I'm James.

You?

[meshiakh]

James! Another guy with Bible name, haha!
I'm Joshua Josephs, nice to meet you o(*^▽^*)o
You can call me Jojo! Or whatever you'd like!
I like nicknames!

[frostythehitman]

[ The last person to bring up that his name is Biblical was a chaplain at Camp Humphreys like 6 years ago.

It's kinda weird. ]

Alright, Jojo it is then.