[text] i could say i'm sorry but i'm not (except i am. i really, really am.)

[frostythehitman]

I've finally got this song together, but I'm still stumped on the title. I'm putting the lyrics in here for anyone who's got any ideas. Consider this an open call for song title suggestions.


Lyrics:
You punched a hole in my heart, and now
I'm an empty vessel, waiting for the music to fill the blank spaces.
What am I supposed to do now?
Nothing left but to forget all the sneering faces

I feel like a forgotten bag of chips abandoned on the streets, my soul shattered and scattering to the winds like potato leaves.
I’d break the whole world if I could
Just to make sure no one ever has to grieves
Again, and I'd break the whole world but I don't think that I should

The emptiness inside of me is hardening like cement
And now there's nothing that can fit through the cracks and spaces
Nothing left but to watch the spiraling descent
Nothing left but to remember all the sneering faces

I feel like a forgotten bag of chips abandoned on the streets, my soul shattered and scattering to the winds like potato leaves.
I’d break the whole world if I could
Just to make sure no one ever has to grieves
Again, and I'd break the whole world but I don't think that I should

[fade out]

Comments

[appraiser]

don't forget the subheading
"(but I don't think that I should)"!
but yes, go ahead and use any of my words! your song did a good job capturing the sentiment, so i'm glad i was able to properly articulate some of what it meant to me

[ He could understand it! Sort of. Honestly, anything with metaphors and imagery, Ryoji can make it make sense even if he has to force it... ]

[frostythehitman]

"I'd Break The Whole World (But I Don't Think I Should)"?I like the sound of that.

You want credit? I can credit you as like a co-writer or something. I'd just need a name.

[appraiser]

[ Does he want credit for this beautiful train wreck of a song? Heck yeah. ]

it's perfect! see? you had the perfect title all along
my name's Ryoji Mochizuki!

[frostythehitman]

Ryoji Mochizuki, okay. I'll write it down in the credits for the album.

I'm James, by the way. James Barnes.

[ Stranger danger on the internet? NAHHH, FUCK THAT ]

[appraiser]

[ but which of them is the danger? tune in at ten ]

it's nice to meet you, James!
i'll be first in line when your album comes out, so you had better get a marker ready to sign it for me!

[frostythehitman]

[ James has never known such pure glee. A shame, right after I deleted his purest glee icon, too. ]

Oh you can bet I'll have one. And you'll be the first to hear when I book a gig to show off this song.