[text] i could say i'm sorry but i'm not (except i am. i really, really am.)

[frostythehitman]

I've finally got this song together, but I'm still stumped on the title. I'm putting the lyrics in here for anyone who's got any ideas. Consider this an open call for song title suggestions.


Lyrics:
You punched a hole in my heart, and now
I'm an empty vessel, waiting for the music to fill the blank spaces.
What am I supposed to do now?
Nothing left but to forget all the sneering faces

I feel like a forgotten bag of chips abandoned on the streets, my soul shattered and scattering to the winds like potato leaves.
I’d break the whole world if I could
Just to make sure no one ever has to grieves
Again, and I'd break the whole world but I don't think that I should

The emptiness inside of me is hardening like cement
And now there's nothing that can fit through the cracks and spaces
Nothing left but to watch the spiraling descent
Nothing left but to remember all the sneering faces

I feel like a forgotten bag of chips abandoned on the streets, my soul shattered and scattering to the winds like potato leaves.
I’d break the whole world if I could
Just to make sure no one ever has to grieves
Again, and I'd break the whole world but I don't think that I should

[fade out]

Comments

YOLO

[gnasher]

i'm the vice captain of the swim team at RU. scouting's not my job, but i don't want to spend my sophmore year racing myself because nobody's been doing it.

[frostythehitman]

Well that changes things.

I can still swim if you want but you do know I'm in high school, right?

FEEL FREE TO IGNORE THIS... I just want more bucky :T

[gnasher]

so? you're not up to the challenge of racing a college freshman?

well who am i to deny such a request?

[frostythehitman]

[ competition radar: A C T I V A T E D

all previous concerns about age difference and the practicality of scouting a high school sophomore have been thrown out the window. ]

When did I say that?

Just tell me when and where you want to do this and I'll give you a race.

Re: well who am i to deny such a request?

[gnasher]

how long do you need to prepare? a race with me isn't easy.
i wouldn't go into it rusty, if i were you.

[frostythehitman]

You say that like I give myself time to get rusty in the first place.

[ James has not swum more than 15 meters in at least two years. He is very rusty. ]

How's this: I'll let you choose the date/time.

[gnasher]

how about may 1st? that gives us both time to deliver something worthwhile.

[frostythehitman]

May 1st, then. You're on. Name the time and place and I'll be there. And I better have that song in hand by then too, or the deal's off.

[gnasher]

RU natatorium, next to the campus gym. 11 am.

you'll have your song.

[frostythehitman]

Make it 5pm and I'll be there.

[ SOME OF US HAVE SCHOOL THAT DAY, RIN!!!! ]